The best way to get ideas for headlines when you are stuck is to keep a swipe file of successful headlines, and consult it for inspiration when you sit down to write a new ad or mailing.
As a shortcut, here’s a partial collection of such headlines from my vast swipe file, organized by category so as to make clear the approach being used:
- Ask a question in the headline.“What Do Japanese Managers Have That American Managers Sometimes Lack?”
- Tie-in to current events.“Stay One Step Ahead of the Stock Market Just Like Martha Stewart – But Without Her Legal Liability!”
- Create a new terminology.“New ‘Polarized Oil’ Magnetically Adheres to Wear Parts in Machine Tools, Making Them Last Up to 6 Times Longer.”
- Give news using the words “new,” “introduction,” or “announcing.” “Announcing a Painless Cut in Defense Spending.”
- Give the reader a command – tell him to do something. “Try Burning This Coupon.”
- Use numbers and statistics. “Who Ever Heard of 17,000 Blooms from a Single Plant?”
- Promise the reader useful information. “How to Avoid the Biggest Mistake You Can Make in Building or Buying a Home.”
- Highlight your offer. “You Can Now Subscribe to the Best New Books – Just as You Do to a Magazine.”
- Tell a story. “They Laughed When I Sat Down at the Piano…But When I Started to Play.”
- Make a recommendation. “The 5 Tech Stocks You Must Own NOW.”
- State a benefit. “Managing UNIX Data Centers – Once Difficult, Now Easy.”
- Make a comparison. “How to Solve Your Emissions Problems – at Half the Energy Cost of Conventional Venturi Scrubbers.”
- Use words that help the reader visualize. “Why Some Foods ‘Explode’ In Your Stomach.”
- Use a testimonial. “After Over Half a Million Miles in the Air Using AVBLEND, We’ve Had No Premature Camshaft Failures.”
- Offer a free special report, catalog, or booklet. “New FREE Special Report Reveals Little-Known Strategy Millionaires Use to Keep Wealth in Their Hands – and Out of Uncle Sam’s.”
- State the selling proposition directly and plainly. “Surgical Tables Rebuilt – Free Loaners Available.”
- Arouse reader curiosity. “The One Internet Stock You MUST Own Now. Hint: It’s NOT What You Think!”
- Promise to reveal a secret. “Unlock Wall Street’s Secret Logic.”
- Be specific. “At 60 Miles an Hour, the Loudest Noise in This New Rolls Royce Comes from the Electric Clock.”
- Target a particular type of reader. “We’re Looking for People to Write Children’s Books.”
- Add a time element. “Instant Incorporation While U-Wait.”
- Stress cost savings, discounts, or value. “Now You Can Get $2,177 Worth of Expensive Stock Market Newsletters for the Incredibly Low Price of Just $69!”
- Give the reader good news. “You’re Never Too Old to Hear Better.”
- Offer an alternative to other products and services. “No Time for Yale – Took College At Home.”
- Issue a challenge. “Will Your Scalp Stand the Fingernail Test?”
- Stress your guarantee. “Develop Software Applications Up to 6 Times Faster or Your Money Back.”
- State the price. “Link 8 PCs to Your Mainframe – Only $2,395.”
- Set up a seeming contradiction. “Profit from ‘Insider Trading’ – 100% Legal!”
- Offer an exclusive the reader can’t get elsewhere.“Earn 500+% Gains With Little-Known ‘Trader’s Secret Weapon.’”
- Address the reader’s concern. “Why Most Small Businesses Fail – and What You Can Do About It.’
- “As Crazy as It Sounds…” “Crazy as it Sounds, Shares of This Tiny R&D Company, Selling for $2 Today, Could be Worth as Much as $100 in the Not-Too-Distant Future.”
- Make a big promise. “Slice 20 Years Off Your Age!”
- Show ROI (return on investment) for purchase of your product. “Hiring the Wrong Person Costs You Three Times Their Annual Salary.”
- Use a “reasons-why” headline. “7 Reasons Why Production Houses Nationwide Prefer Unilux Strobe Lighting When Shooting Important TV Commercials.”
- Answer important questions about your product or service. “7 Questions to Ask Before You Hire a Collection Agency…And One Good Answer to Each.”
- Stress the value of your premiums. “Yours Free – Order Now and Receive $280 in Free Gifts with Your Paid Subscription.”
- Help the reader achieve a goal. “Now You Can Create a Breakthrough Marketing Plan Within the Next 30 Days … for FREE!”
- Make a seemingly contradictory statement or promise. “Cool Any Room in Your House Fast – Without Air Conditioning!”

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